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Main Chala, Akela jo tha!! ;)

19 Jun

Main toh chala, doondte apne raah ko…
Chalta phira, jaane na kal kya ho! 🙂              
Manzil thi door, andhera sa tha…
Usko paane ki raah mein, akela jo tha!

Chalte chalte, katgayi raathe…
Har awaaaz ne yaad dilaadi uske baathe! 😉
Saansein leta raha, aasaan na tha…
Usko choone ki chaah mein, akela jo tha!

Kaash woh chalti mere saath…
Pakadne ko toh milta uska haath! 😛
Phir bhi main chalta raha, mushkil sa tha…
Lekin rokha nahi koi mujhe, akela jo tha! 😦

Abhi sochta hoon, milegi woh mujhe kabhi…
Kabhi maayoos ho jaata hoon sochte hue ki, kyun nahi abhi?
Main aage badtha chala, rastha anjaan sa tha…
Par woh mere liye hi bani hey, kyunki main akela jo tha! 😀

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Posted by on June 19, 2008 in Happens~2~me

 

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8 responses to “Main Chala, Akela jo tha!! ;)

  1. Niveditha

    June 19, 2008 at 9:16 pm

    wat a mindblowing poem sree…
    wah.. kamaal kar diya! 🙂

    har jagah uski talash na karo
    maayusi mein aise aahen na bharo
    bani hai ek, jo hogi saathi teri
    bas usse milne ki hai deri! 🙂

    okies.. that was a real bad attempt! 😛

     
  2. Sree

    June 19, 2008 at 11:35 pm

    @ Nive,

    Thanks a lot for liking it!! 😀

    To reply to your chutkula…Arz kiya hey…

    Na doondhu toh kaise milegi woh…
    Mere intezaar agar woh kar rahi hey toh?
    Talaash nahi karta mein, Ankhen khula rakta hoon…
    Mile na mile, bus doondtha reheta hoon!! 😛

    Thanks a lot buddy! 😀

     
  3. Aparna

    June 20, 2008 at 8:52 am

    arrrey wah! aap toh acche khaase shaayar nikle aur woh bhi hindi mein? jawaab nahi aapka:)
    Was a gud attempt 🙂

     
  4. Sujatha

    June 20, 2008 at 12:10 pm

    Sree,

    Tat was a hindi poem which I could understand despite being “disabled” in this language!!!!

    Nicely drafted!!!

    P.S: //Pakadne ko toh milta uska haath! // “holding hands” huh???
    Y does this remind me of Trich:lol:

     
  5. GoodEarth

    June 20, 2008 at 1:25 pm

    Terrific shaayari doc!! Very impressive & touching!
    Loved these lines…
    “Manzil thi door, andhera sa tha…
    Usko paane ki raah mein, akela jo tha!” expecting more of such scintillating poetry 🙂

     
  6. Jass

    June 20, 2008 at 1:56 pm

    Arey waah! Par there is no direct reference to she over here !
    So this is officially not a part of the series but.. mm.. actually is, OR is this a new series, since you had concluded she was imaginary and realization had dawned !;)

     
  7. Sree

    June 20, 2008 at 6:55 pm

    @ Aparna,

    Waise Angrezi mein liktha kam tha…Hindi mein hi chalta tha apna Caravan… 😉

    Thanks for liking it buddy! 😀

    @ Suj,

    I don’t know what you understood, but I guess you missed a point here it was directed towards a gal and not Trich of all ppl!! 😀
    Thanks for liking it buddy! 😀

     
  8. Sree

    June 20, 2008 at 6:57 pm

    @ Sow,

    Thanks a lot for liking my dear Patient!! 😀

    @ Jass,

    This has nothing to do with the ‘she’ series dude…but could well turn out to be a new series about me being ‘Akela’! 😉
    And I have not concluded the ‘she’ series, not yet! 😛
    Thanks a lot buddy! 😀

     

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