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Main…aur…tum…

21 Jun

Main kaise waqt bitau, meri har lamhon mein ho tum…
Main kaise kisi aur se baatein karu, meri har lafzo mein ho tum…
Main khush kaise rahu, har muskurahat mein ho tum…
Main ab kaise rou, har ashq mein jo ho tum…
Main kaise kuch karu, har ehsaas mein jo ho tum…
Main kaise tumhe bhoolu, jab mann ke har kone mein ho tum…
Main kaise kisi aur ko dekhu, jab har chehere mein ho tum…
Main kaise kisi aur ka intezaar karu, shaayad jo laut aaogi tum…
Main ab kaise raat ko sou, meri sukoon jo ho tum…
Main udaas kaise rahu, jab meri yaadon mein ho tum…
Main kaise kisi aur ko chahu, meri chahat toh ho tum…
Main kaise kisi aur ko apna kahu, meri pyaar jo ho tum…
Main jiyu toh kaise jiyu, meri har saans mein ho tum…
Main ab kaise Main rahu, yaar ab jo mere paas nahi ho tum??? 😦

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8 Comments

Posted by on June 21, 2008 in Happens~2~me

 

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8 responses to “Main…aur…tum…

  1. Niveditha

    June 22, 2008 at 6:38 pm

    oh my god…
    sree… wat the… all sad sad sound ho rahe ho??? 😦

     
  2. Niveditha

    June 22, 2008 at 6:50 pm

    zindagi hai kya, ek lamba sa safar hai
    kabhi milti hai khushi to kabhi gham milti hai
    door hi sahi, pyaar to hamesha rahegi
    teri chaahat hamesha meri rag rag mein bahegi! 🙂

    a little try form my side.. he he he
    keep smiling always. 🙂

     
  3. Sree

    June 22, 2008 at 8:20 pm

    @ Nive,

    Hehe…no no not sad at all…I believe in keeping sadness aside!! 😀
    And those chaar lines…subhan Allah!! 😉
    Thanks buddy! 😀

     
  4. Aparna

    June 24, 2008 at 5:37 pm

    Me surprised to see this title(Main aur Tum). I thought you would keep it as ..Hum..Tum aur Main(we..she and me 🙂 ) or probably ‘hum tum’ .

    Beautiful lines, liked it a lot.

     
  5. bluediamond

    June 24, 2008 at 6:32 pm

    this is why you should try to get busy yourself on weekends…. hmmmm….

     
  6. Sree

    June 24, 2008 at 8:29 pm

    @ Aparna,

    Haha…yeah, I thought on those lines too…but then on second thoughts changed it…didn’t want to be too predictable u see! 😛
    Thanks a lot for liking! 😀

    @ AKB,

    Why? I need not get into that mood to write such lines re…I just need to think that way! 😀
    Thanks buddy! 😀

     
  7. Pavithra

    June 26, 2008 at 2:43 pm

    WOW! Sree, tht was a grt post indeed! Trying ur hand with Hindi poetry :-), Expecting a Harivanshrai Bachchan from you!

     
  8. Sree

    June 26, 2008 at 10:24 pm

    @ Pavi,

    Whoa…that would be like expecting too much!! 😉
    I’ll do my humble attempts! 😛
    Thanks a lot buddy! 😀

     

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