Aatank se aazaadi…

10 Dec


Kab se main khud se ladta tha…
Na jaane kis cheez se darta tha…
Mujhe toh banadiya unhone ek aatankwadi…
Na jaane kisse chahiye unhe aazaadi…

Na main hindu hoon na musalmaan…
Naahi mein reh sakha achcha insaan…
Na main aisa tha, na banna chahata tha…
Iskool mein, main har waqt awwal number aata tha…

Kismat ne mujhe iss mod pe laa rakha…
Na jaane main kyun na wapus jaa sakha…
Khoon pasina, aaj mujhe ek baraa bar…
So-u chain se main hazaaron lashe girakar…

Uss din ka hey mujhe intezaar…
Jis din aatank ki hogi antim haar…
Mujh jaise kaayar na paida ho kabhi…
Dua main karta hoon sache mann se abhi…


Posted by on December 10, 2008 in Thoughts


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7 responses to “Aatank se aazaadi…

  1. Revs

    December 10, 2008 at 9:20 am

    Good one Sree!! 🙂
    Cant really agree with this though

    //Na jaane main kyun na wapus jaa sakha…

    You always have a choice man!!

  2. aparna

    December 10, 2008 at 9:25 am

    a poem from a terrorist side ….told u ..u hav a terrorist mind:)

  3. Sree

    December 10, 2008 at 9:38 pm

    @ Revs,

    I understand, but I guess he wasnt able to make that choice…hence this statement!! 😉
    Thanks buddy!! 😀

    @ Aparna,

    I am just reading the manipulated mind!! 😀
    Thanks buddy!! 😀

  4. Dishit

    December 11, 2008 at 8:55 pm

    nice one buddy 🙂

  5. Sree

    December 12, 2008 at 6:28 pm

    @ Dishit,

    Thanks buddy! 😀

  6. niveditha

    December 13, 2008 at 9:33 am

    kya criminal mind hai 😉
    he he..
    but then nice poem re… no one bothers to think from the other’s side

  7. Sree

    December 13, 2008 at 11:16 am

    @ Nive,

    Yeah, I was just trying to see from the other side…and believe me, this side is much greener!! 😀
    And ya, I do have a criminal mind…but being educated helps me cover it up! 🙂
    Thanks a lot buddy!! 😀


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