[55-Fiction]~Aayi Woh! :)

06 Jun

This time a 55F in Hindi…

Aayi Woh

Uske aane ki raah mein, main najaane kitne dino se kar-raha tha intezaar…
Aana tha usko par aayi kyun nahi, ho-raha tha dil ye bekaraar…
Akela tha main, badh-rahi thi garmi…
Naa chain ki neend, naa thi uski chumban ki narmi…
Aakir mein usko bhoolne ki, ki maine koshish…
Kambaqt dil ko maanaane, aayi woh…Baarish!

Dedicated to all those who love rains and specially to those who love to get drenched to the core, like me!! 😀

Updates on BPL: “The Inscribed Tribe of which I’m a proud tribal, topped the Super 6 round!! The results were out this evening!! 🙂 You can check the results at Cafe Ginger Chai (link: HERE) 😀

Three Tribals, individually topped in the 8 given topics:

1) Gyanban’s UNBRIDGED

2) Guria’s SCARS and

3) Your’s Truly with KISMAT DIS-KONNECTION 🙂

YAY!! Time to do some Jinga-la-la dance around the fire!! 😉


Posted by on June 6, 2010 in I~do~such~things, poetry, Stories


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9 responses to “[55-Fiction]~Aayi Woh! :)

  1. Neha

    June 6, 2010 at 9:38 pm

    Congrats Tribals 🙂 a well deserved victory 😀

    and your 55er – I started humming this song – Akela chala tha main, haan main..Na aaya akela..mere sang sang aaya teri, yaadon ka mela 😀

    don’t ask me just came on my mind 😛

  2. aaradhnak

    June 6, 2010 at 9:44 pm

    Congratsssssssssssssssssssss 😀
    And i can already see you dancing 😛
    Lovely pic there ,,,, soo coolll 🙂
    Naa chain ki neend, naa thi uski chumban ki narmi…// Lol ihhihihii masttttt 😛
    Kambaqt dil ko maanaane, aayi woh…Baarish!// i dono but i find it sweet evrytime i read 😀
    Mastttttt 55 😀

  3. sushobhan

    June 6, 2010 at 9:45 pm

    Hey congrats man.. That post is just full of sensible nonsense and the way u wrote it it just rocks..:)

  4. Arif

    June 7, 2010 at 7:38 pm

    Lol Sree!! Count me in the jinga-la-la dance too! 😀

  5. Sree

    June 7, 2010 at 9:15 pm

    @ Neha,

    Haha…am still wondering as to how that song came to your mind!! 🙂 Thanks a lot for your wishes!!! 🙂

    @ Aaradhnak,

    Hehe…thanks a lot re!! 😀

    @ Susho,

    Dude…hehe…thanks a lot buddy! 😀

    @ Arif,
    Count kya? Tum toh ho hi!! 😛
    Thanks buddy!! 😀

  6. Thousif Raza

    June 9, 2010 at 9:09 pm

    its great to see a lil difference, and you come up with it every time 🙂 liked it… 🙂 and your flick wala 55 was great… and liked the story, nice attempt hain 🙂

    wish you good luck for the future stories 🙂

  7. Sree

    June 14, 2010 at 1:00 am

    Thanks a lot Thousif Bhai!! 🙂

  8. Agila

    June 15, 2010 at 6:33 am

    Awwwwwwwwwwww Sree!! For the absolute lover of rains that I am, that piece of creation totally swept me off my feet! 😀 Absolutely fabulous!! 🙂

  9. Sree

    June 18, 2010 at 1:25 am

    @ Agila,
    Thats like awwwww 😀
    Thanks a lot buddy…glad u liked it! 😀


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