Dunno why I wrote this, when I wrote this…
All I know is that I wrote it long long ago, and found it on my desk scribbled on a sheet of cramped paper!
Khilta hey gulaab, Khilta hey khwaab…
Har sawaal ka nahi milta kyun hey jawaab?
Tadapta hey jism, Tadpata hey pyaar…
Izhaar se zyaada karna padta kyun hey intezaar?
Barasta hey baarish, Behti hey nadiya…
Chor bazaar ke peeche gumsum kyun hey galiya?
Rangeen hey wadiya, Rangeela hey mann…
Do paise kamaane ke liye bechti kyun hey ye tann?
Khula hey aasmaan, Khuli hey khidki…
Khota hey naseeb, najaane kyun hey kadki?
If you are feeling sad reading whatever you read, have a smile…like this gentleman! 😀
All in the mind... 
megzone
June 18, 2010 at 11:05 pm
baappreee…. kyaa jabardasttt hindi mein likha bey…
albeit one gadbad acc to me
shudnt it be HAI KYU instead of KYU HAI?? 😛
just a thought…
/Barasta hey baarish, Behti hey nadiya…
Chor bazaar ke peeche gumsum kyun hey galiya?/
oiieeee chor bazaarrr kidhar se aagaya idharr..??
any significance???
/Rangeen hey wadiya, Rangeela hey mann…
Do paise kamaane ke liye bechti kyun hey ye tann?/
isshhh…. ekdum ONE TIGHT SLAAPPp….!!!!!!!
masttt post oi laalten..ekdum fataangggg…..
lage raho 😀
Manna
June 18, 2010 at 11:11 pm
This ones cute :D:D
Neha
June 18, 2010 at 11:14 pm
barasta hai barish ya barasti hai baarish? 😀 kadki? hahahahaahhahahahahaha 😀
loved this one 😀
Sree
June 18, 2010 at 11:32 pm
@ Tigrrr…
Oyeeee..
aise hi math chada ok 😛 ye kuch jabardastt nahi hey …hehe…
Hey kyun? in title u mean?
Chalta re kuch bhi…poetic freedom jo hey 😉
Abey…chor bazaar mein baarish nahi hoti kya? 😛
Slap for reality? ya khuda…mere ko bachcha iss naari se..hehe
Thanks re 😀
@ Manna,
Cute laga…oh my goodness! 😛
Thank you ji! 😀
@ Nnnnnnn,
I think baarish ka na, no gender problem..barastaa bhi hey, barasti bhi hey 😛
Thanks for likings! 😀
Neha
June 19, 2010 at 1:32 am
chal be shaane…paani barasta hai, and barish barasti hai 😛
kya re jhol master 😀
Neha
June 19, 2010 at 1:35 am
ok, i am spamming your comment form, but remember – dekho barish ho rahi hai? it’s raining, it’s raining, it’s raining 😛
Deepali
June 19, 2010 at 11:05 am
do u actually write these poems urself?
brilliant! these cud fetch u tonnes! 🙂
Sree
June 19, 2010 at 11:18 am
@ Nnnnnn,
Haha…poetic freedom hey na re…I can play with genders like they dont exist! 😉
Oh haan…woh Anu Malik ka nasal song…loved it then..along with his “garam chai ki pyaali ho…” hehe..
Keep spamming, if thats what u call it 😛
@ Deep,
Arre believe me…me moi myself writes them…hehe
Thanks for liking..waise u didnt specify “tonnes of what?” 😛
Thousif Raza
June 19, 2010 at 3:40 pm
hmmm nice thoughts yaar…. sometimes we get gems of writing in the most crumpled of places… just like these…. it ooo gotta go home and fond such pices 😛
take care and keep writing…………
aaradhnak
June 19, 2010 at 4:40 pm
Kisnee kataa thaa tumkoo jo ye aisaa poem likhaa?? 😛
har do line dusri line se koi waasstaa hi nai rakhtii 😛
abi mai bhi soch rahi why you wrote this 🙄
seems like jaise idhrr udhrr tumaraa bhejaa bhataktaa hai naa wase hi bhatkii bhatkiii lag rahi ye poem 😛
but points achaaa 😀 n i won the challenge i dint laugh at the pic 🙄
Treat iske liye bhi 😛
hasnee jaisa kuch nai isse bettr apni daalte to hasii aati bhi 😛
Sree
June 20, 2010 at 11:30 am
@ Thousif,
Haha…pls do search 😛
Thanks a lot buddy! 😀
@ Aaradhnak,
lol..pata nahi re kisne kaata..lekin kaata zaroor hoga 😛
haan all are disconnected but similarly written 😀
haan bheja toh apna thamm ta nahi ek jagah par 😛
lol…nahi hasi? che…ok treat 😛
mera hi daal deta 😉
Thanks a lot buddy! 😀
Priyanka
June 21, 2010 at 3:08 pm
nahi pata tha ki u write hindi poems well too!! infact very good!!
Sree
June 25, 2010 at 9:29 pm
Hehe..thanks Pri 😀
tikulicious
July 17, 2010 at 1:51 pm
Hindi poetry .. that’s a delight. very good ..keep it going. read mine too. BTW very impressive pic. 😛
Cheers!!!
Sree
July 17, 2010 at 4:39 pm
Haha…thats just to put a smile on Tiks! 😛
As they say na…ladies love older men 😉 no wonder u find it impressive 😛
Thanks buddy! 😀