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[Poetry]~ But then…

19 Jun

Aaradhnak and I were having this chat. Well, we do a lot of blog-a-talk discussing on topics – what we write, what we don’t, what went or can go wrong, what we didn’t try for long or at all, et. al.
A: “It’s been a long time since you wrote something poetic…in English”
Me: “Hmmm…yeah, seems like…you want it to be sad or with humor?”
A: “Sad is better…we can at least be sad…” and after a pause she said, “…and at the same time laugh, at the way you write sad poetry” πŸ™„

Hmm…So dedicated to A…Call it poetry or whatever…here’s to a bit of sadness – that you can choose to laugh on! πŸ˜€

It all changed and I don’t know how…
You just came by, and I fell in love…
It was my first time, this acquaintance…
Happy and excited I was, at that instance…

Flowers bloomed, happiness was all around…
I heard music, in every other silly sound…
The moments you were missed, were very few…
As at every blink of an eye, I did see you…

But then…

Why did you leave me all alone…
Why did you break-up over the phone…
Why did you make me write this song…
Why did you promise to sing along…

What happened to those happy times…
Are they just meant for those nursery rhymes…
Tell me, where did I go all wrong…
I thought this would last a lifelong…

Hmm…

It all changed and I don’t know how…
What do I do without you, now…
It’s so damn tough, to live in the past…
You were my first, you are my last…

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12 responses to “[Poetry]~ But then…

  1. Neha

    June 19, 2010 at 8:23 pm

    waah, acha likhta hai re tu..abhi ye sad ko funny karna hai to last word of each line ko do baar likh le πŸ˜›

     
  2. Siddarth

    June 19, 2010 at 8:41 pm

    Good one Sri. Sh*t happens. But as Johnnie Walker says – Keep walking

     
  3. aaradhnak

    June 19, 2010 at 9:38 pm

    hihiihhi masttttttttttt masttttttttt likhaa re πŸ˜€
    ekdam totally related to what we were talking πŸ™‚ hmm niceeeeeeee πŸ˜€
    n ye kya photu dala huh ,, tumara isse betrr hota πŸ˜›
    btw hoping you will sing this too :mrgreen: cz it sounded to me like a song πŸ˜€
    Lol it would have been more nice if you would have told
    new aayi and ye wali ki memory bhi gone πŸ˜›

    20 min me hmm masttttttttt ayaaa ye πŸ˜€
    Now i kno why you dont think and write πŸ˜›

     
  4. Ellen

    June 19, 2010 at 10:05 pm

    //Why did you make me write this song…
    Why did you promise to sing along…// lol who was this meant to be targeted at? the person who made u write the poem?

    Nice one btw…

     
  5. slpmartin

    June 20, 2010 at 1:04 am

    Quite a nice poem from a lover whose lost their lover…enjoyed reading your post…Cheers!

     
  6. Sree

    June 20, 2010 at 1:42 pm

    @ Neha,

    Lol…thats a funky idea…try karna padega πŸ˜›
    Thanks buddy! πŸ˜€

    @ Sid,

    Yeah whatever happens, it inspires for something else! πŸ˜‰
    Haan Johhny bhai, zindabad πŸ˜‰ Thanks buddy! πŸ˜€

    @ Aaradhnak,
    Related na? bachgaya πŸ˜›
    Har jagah pe mera photo daalu toh there’s no fun re…hehe
    haan 20 mins mein πŸ˜›
    will put a tune…gaana toh kisi aur se gawaana padega πŸ˜›
    If i think, it goes in no direction…ghoosa bhara hey dimaag mein πŸ˜›
    Thanks buddy! πŸ˜€

    @ El…
    Haha..no no..kyun maar khilaana chahti ho aise bolke? πŸ˜›
    Thanks buddy! πŸ˜€

    @ SLPMartin,
    Thanks buddy! πŸ˜€

     
  7. Priyanka

    June 21, 2010 at 2:45 pm

    wow!!
    loved it!!
    //It’s so damn tough, to live in the past…
    You were my first, you are my last…// esp these lines!

     
  8. megzone

    June 21, 2010 at 10:33 pm

    waaaahhhh…. ye wala merko alert nai aya 😦
    networked blogs se 😐
    grrrrrrrrrrr…………
    wo chudel ki hatt gayi ab teri bhi hatta di usne πŸ˜›
    ekdummm fataanggg hai teri poem πŸ˜›

     
  9. Amit

    June 24, 2010 at 12:59 am

    Nice one. Won’t tell if funny though, on the other hand it was really sincere and drenched with feelings.

    mamu tu to har genre me master ho gaya hai πŸ˜€

     
  10. Sree

    June 25, 2010 at 9:31 pm

    @ Pri,

    Thanks re πŸ˜€

    @ Tigrrrr,

    hehe…sometimes even they give dhoka πŸ˜€
    hehe…kuch toh likhwaaya usne πŸ˜›
    Thanks buddy! πŸ˜€

    @ Amit,
    Funny try nahi kiya bhai πŸ˜‰
    Thanks a lot buddy! πŸ˜€

     
  11. Preethi

    July 18, 2010 at 3:06 am

    //Call it poetry or whatever…here’s to a bit of sadness – that you can choose to laugh on// omg!….you are cracking me up!
    //It all changed and I don’t know how…// Actually..nothing has changed, I dont know how..The same cheery witing..great going…….:)

     
  12. Sree

    July 25, 2010 at 11:45 am

    @ Preetz,
    hehe…i try to bring a smile on, always…sadly or happily πŸ˜›
    Thanks buddy! πŸ˜€

     

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