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A dry day, in May!

26 Jul

Lights are flashing, mind’s disturbing…
Not my fault, her love’s lost…
Tides repeating, times are changing…
Not her fault, it pained me a lot…

Met her down the street…
Sometime late, of last September…
We had fun, mood being upbeat…
And a walk to remember…

Hand in hand, singing a song…
Caring for none, loud and drunk…
Going no where, just heading along…
Beneath the vast sky, lay our bunk…

Talking of birds, and to stars…
Lost in time, and into each other…
Window-shopping, strolls to bazaars…
Bonds got stronger, we didn’t bother…

And then…

One fine morning, it all went wrong…
Sometime mid, of this May…
There was no music, thus ended the song…
There was no her, no liquor, just a dry day…

PS: This is a rejected piece of work for an internal corporate blog-a-zine…rejected cos the theme was “Be happy” and this one though started happy, went sour πŸ˜‰

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Posted by on July 26, 2010 in poetry

 

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8 responses to “A dry day, in May!

  1. Himanshu

    July 26, 2010 at 9:20 pm

    Wonderful composition mate! Should totally pass for an upbeat dhinchak song. Cheers! πŸ™‚

     
  2. Rumya

    July 26, 2010 at 9:35 pm

    Looks like a case of ‘All good things must come to an End’. 😦

    But…there is always a bright spot. πŸ™‚
    Everything happens for the best. πŸ˜›
    History repeats itself, so there will be more music for that upbeat mood πŸ˜‰
    Lovely Poem Sree. Enjoyed reading your plight!! Hehe!! πŸ˜€

     
  3. Rajlakshmi

    July 26, 2010 at 10:48 pm

    arey tu kabse sad sad likhne laga πŸ˜€
    i can feel it kafi koshish ki tune isse happy banane ki πŸ˜›
    lovely poem πŸ™‚ and you know i much i love tragedies πŸ˜€

     
  4. dmanji

    July 27, 2010 at 5:13 pm

    Lol! I am a little poetry challenged u see but poem seemed good πŸ˜€ …and agree with Rajlakshmi ….u writing sad sad things?

     
  5. megzone

    July 27, 2010 at 9:44 pm

    isko tune banake gaa πŸ˜›
    croak croak πŸ˜›

     
  6. vivek singh

    August 4, 2010 at 12:03 am

    let me get myself right!
    is the her in the last line and throughout, ur bottle of whiskey or u talked about both of them?
    what i understood from this is that u enjoyed one fine day last sept with hard liquor and one bad day in mid-may u went sad coz it was a dry day..
    if this is so then 5 star post boss πŸ™‚
    the girls looks HOT πŸ™‚

     
  7. aaradhnak

    August 4, 2010 at 11:26 pm

    Kiske baar me likhaa hai ye ??

    Lovedd it πŸ™‚

     
  8. Sree

    August 20, 2010 at 12:09 am

    Thanks Himanshu!! πŸ˜€

    My plight indeed…thanks Rums! πŸ˜€

    Yeah..great poets love tragedy! πŸ˜‰ Waise tragedy and Raji rhymes πŸ˜› Thanks Princess! πŸ˜€

    hehe..dmanji…i try to be different sometimes! πŸ˜‰
    Thanks buddy! πŸ˜€

    Its croak croak only! πŸ˜› Thanks re Megs! πŸ˜€

    You are right! πŸ˜€ Thanks Viv! πŸ˜€

    aiseich! πŸ˜‰ Thanks Aaradhnak! πŸ™‚

     

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